Michael
on March 18, 2024
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Looking for feedback on what else I should include in this chapter. I've improved the formatting and extended the chapter with a lot more detail. I'm sort of stuck on what to add next. I was thinking of starting to list major cities and exports and families in each, that sort of thing. Maybe do geographical details, too, describing the denizens therein. Or should I add more detail to each family description and include individual personalities? Looking for other stuff that should be included (besides stats, which I'd have to do in 3.5e notation as a placeholder until I have my own system more developed. Part of the catalyst for this was OpenOffice corrupting my file, so I had to rebuild the entire book--and added over 30 pages of detail.
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Bradley Simpson
Looks pretty good
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March 19, 2024
Michael
It loaded the pages in the reverse order for some reason.
March 19, 2024
Michael
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